The site looks promising. If you let me know when it's fleshed out, I'll take another look. So far, I'd recommend recoding so the white text appears only over the black background. Where the black fades to blue, the white is hard to read. Otherwise the art is lovely.
I am intrigued by the backstory and the potential tension there. Is it possible to depose the dragons without destroying the world? If deposing the despots would destroy what's left of the world, is it still worth doing?
I would like to hear more about this. It sounds like something I might enjoy reviewing.
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Date: 2009-06-07 06:15 am (UTC)I am intrigued by the backstory and the potential tension there. Is it possible to depose the dragons without destroying the world? If deposing the despots would destroy what's left of the world, is it still worth doing?
I would like to hear more about this. It sounds like something I might enjoy reviewing.