As I said, it was not the profanity per se but the amount of it. When a three sentence exchange takes more than a minute because of the number of times "cock-sucker" is used, it gets old fast. That is just poor writing or writing to shock, it does not aid the setting or the story, in my mind.
I guess I will give it some more time to develop then before deciding one way or the other.
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I guess I will give it some more time to develop then before deciding one way or the other.